tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2510111002420484199.post961194246713010399..comments2013-04-16T12:36:46.235-07:00Comments on Michael English: Found Poem - The IslandAnonymoushttp://www.blogger.com/profile/08478989262279200515noreply@blogger.comBlogger5125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2510111002420484199.post-14156377489948845922013-04-14T14:00:29.612-07:002013-04-14T14:00:29.612-07:00Much improved overall experience from an audience ...Much improved overall experience from an audience perspective from the first draft. The balance is better between the music as backdrop and the focus on the voice...much nicer. I liked it.<br />Lovely imagery and expression was appropriate. Couldn't have gotten that from just having you submit a poem typed on a piece of paper or even on your blog. Ms. K.https://www.blogger.com/profile/10922365560133640641noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2510111002420484199.post-53547729527111395022013-04-13T14:13:17.133-07:002013-04-13T14:13:17.133-07:00Great job on describing the island! You created a ...Great job on describing the island! You created a very lively imagery. I like how you describe the sunset as a drop of burning gold. It's a nice found poem you created.Garyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17018799707303762922noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2510111002420484199.post-51354244094532011122013-04-11T23:48:51.851-07:002013-04-11T23:48:51.851-07:00I like how your second stanza is really short and ...I like how your second stanza is really short and abrupt, just like the darkness that will overcome the island during sunset. The poem contains many adjectives, which goes well with your other flowery languages. Frank Zhuhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13061761331804828799noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2510111002420484199.post-14713450752308392062013-04-11T23:40:34.384-07:002013-04-11T23:40:34.384-07:00I enjoyed how easy it was to hear the poem over th...I enjoyed how easy it was to hear the poem over the sound of the music.Ari Nevillehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16861603901389497875noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2510111002420484199.post-15060698070288237332013-04-11T20:10:42.588-07:002013-04-11T20:10:42.588-07:00I thought that your voice really helped match the ...I thought that your voice really helped match the tone of the poem, which is still describing wonderful imagery, but has a lingering sadness to it. The poem had a nice harmony to the music. Well done.<br /><br />Vincent T.Unknownhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07766212027846635242noreply@blogger.com